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wildnfreedolphin
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abuseReally well-written poem. I like the use of the idea of pigs flying... Reminds me of "once in a blue moon" for some weird reason. Anyway, well-written. Keep up the good work! =)
Sagaciouspnay
2005-03-01
ch 1,
abuseI was kind of confused where this poem went but eventually i understood. It's sad but somewhat funny the same time.I liked it!
Gaki Toki
2005-02-26
ch 1,
abuseRen: Pigs? I've seen cows fly but never pigs...you live in Tornado Ally er somthin' cause that's where I saw that cow...

Jason: Shut up Ren, you may have seen a cow fly but that's not the point here, it's the loss of love that's the point here!

Ren: ...Bummer...

Jason: (Rolls his eyes) Rne, You really have to learn to interpret poetry better, I mea it's so out there in this one it's not even funny! It's says right there! (Points to screen)

Ren: ...Okay...

Jason: AH! YOU ARE SO DUMB!

Ren: I saved your butt Mister, I dojn't think you should be calling me dumb! Maybe the next time you face Death Row I should just leave you to die.

Jason: ...That was the original story...

Ren: I at least TRIED in that one, I could just leave you and not try.

Jason: But I still died.

Ren: ...NOT IN THE NEW ONE!

Jason: We're getting off topic, I'm sorry Sammigal, we're just two characters from a story you didn't read, but I liked this, I dunno about Ren, he's a stupid genius(get that) and doesn't know how to read poetry.

Ren: I RESENT THAT!

Jason: I bet you do.
bkwy
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abusehey that's my line !! lol

ouch... angsty angsty. makes me wanna cry. wad an ** the guy is.

alot of feelings went into this one too... great job. n stop stealing my lines =)
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