Reviews for Tonights beer money

Je-Nie-Dieu 2005-03-24 ch 1,	abuseWhy'd it take you three days? And work on your grammar, because English is obviously not your first or even second language. Seriously. A haiku is 5-7-5, not 5-5-6-5! What the hell?!
Meaningless Julia 2005-02-28 ch 1,	abuseintriguing... very oblique, allowing the reader to find their own explanation, their own meaning. I like that. Too much poetry on fictionpress is overwritten when what they want to say can be done in just a few, simple words. Haikus are new to me, but I really like them.
LostInReality 2005-02-23 ch 1,	abuseAha! I love it! Especially the title!
grim-dreamer 2005-02-22 ch 1,	abuseYou owe me a beer in heaven.