This is very good. I like it. It's not like a lot of Evanescence inspired work I've read, where everything just sounds like the lyrics rearranged. Good job, it's definitely your own.

This is awesome. It's very lyrical, and if you're into composition, you should see what you can do with it...good job.

I like this. I am also a big fan of evanescence and if I had to guess this seems a bit like a mix of HELLO and IMAGINARY. It seems great. I love the idea of someone's voice just enchanting someone. It reminds me a bit of the sirens in Homer's "The Oddessy." Keep up the good work. It seems like you have a beautiful gift for poetry.