you're right, this makes no sense. it sounds interesting, but you might want to go over it again with a fresh start and try to make it make sense

Lovely bit of originality ). I really wish I understood this better; I must have read it about 4 times now and I only have a general grasp of what you're trying to say /. So I suppose my only constructive criticism is that perhaps you should elaborate more (I love the wording, I'd just really like to know what it's saying _).

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