knowing what you want is sometimes as bad as not knowing what u need... what u need is more important than any want... a need is the most powerful thing...other than love of course

ahh! reveiws are too short to explain how much i relate to this! wow... just... wow... (are there any other words i can use to describe poems this good? all the other ones seem so old and... impotent... like they've been worn down.) I wish to say this with the meaning the words should have originally. "Brilliant, Loving, Deep, Awesome"

I feel that way myself concerning another person

Heya,

This poem has a really nice flow and rhythm to it and I admire the feeling and depth you've managaed to write into it. It's very very good and my only criticism is you missed a space in between so and blind. Lol, and this shows just how amazing the poem is that your only criticism is a missed spacing!

Fantastic.

~ Ethereal Kisses ~

Makes me have an urge to talk to a special someone. :)

love it! i've often felt this way about a guy that i like but he doesn't know it yet... ~love is all you need~

all i ever wanted was for you to shut up you little fruitcake

Wonderful poem. Powerful and strong. Nice work!

aw very bittersweet

Must say, I like this one better than 'Poisoned Heart' It's very descriptive, I can feel what you're saying while I read it. -Sammie (S'mie)

I thought it was creepy that this describes life at the moment, doubly so when i read that another person (earlier review) thought this as well! I think the first three lines are really nice.

you got your meaning across very well. i personally can very well connect with this poem, so it was nice to read. it's a tiny bit choppy, but i don't think that interrupts the flow too much. i guess i shouldn't even be pointing it out because i write like that a lot too. XD i liked it a lot though.

hmm.. don't think I can really relate.. but this is pretty cool. Oh wait, I have felt this way. Makes me feel stupid.. anyways.. good job. I like this

^__^ That's so cute. And at the same way, a little sad. But good nevertheless ^_^ (What is with those, anyways?) *giggles*

Thanks for the review!

I like how you end this the same way that you started it. I like the use of reflection and everything. Good job. QueenVixta