|Reviews for A Vampire's Kiss|
| Embyr Black 3/6/05 . chapter 2
i happen to have a n obsession w/ vampires and u have one of the best vamp poems i have ever read.
| Magician-Ashley 2/24/05 . chapter 1
| TrueToMyself 2/22/05 . chapter 1
O.O Wow. You took something as cliched as a vampie and added a completely new twist to it. Smart!
In "A nod from me as I stare, captivated by this being," you said "stare" which doesn't match the past tense of the rest of the poem. Maybe "I gave a nod as I stared, captivated by this being"?
Also, your word choice really stresses the emotions and makes the reader feel as if he/she is there. Keep up the great work!