|Reviews for The day my family turned on me|
| Avocet 3/30/06 . chapter 1
wow...i understand that
| earcandy 2/7/06 . chapter 1
i especially like the last 2 lines D deep...
| Fang3h 1/28/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Very touching and sad.
| Elphie Thropp 10/1/05 . chapter 1
Well written! You capture the emotions of the poem well even if they are depressing.
| Fox Angel 9/30/05 . chapter 1
great poem very powerful you should be proud of yourself!Again your poem is on my favorite list.
| Saint Sade 5/1/05 . chapter 1
I know how you feel.
| Nyte Tym Starr 4/9/05 . chapter 1
yet another powerful writing. im sorry that your family shunned you that is the worst thing in this world to happen. maybe one day they can c the love and take u back.
| Topaz Sagittarius 3/15/05 . chapter 1
Wow! That's a very powerful poem. Sometimes I can't trust my family but after reading your poem, my family seems fantastic.
| alligater20 3/13/05 . chapter 1
Wow this is very powerful. I really like it. And I don't mind spelling errors or anything :) We all have them, can't avoid them. So yes, nice work. I think you said it with as few words as possible, but as many words as needed. Once again, great job.
| Worthy Of Love2222222 3/10/05 . chapter 1
That was really good.
| YoLo NoR 3/6/05 . chapter 1
Wow this is definitely full of emotion and in my opinion the best poems and stories are written with emotion, about experiences and feelings. I love the way you wrote this although the stroy is really sad. I'm sorry they treated you this way but in a different situation my dad disowned me, and it's an interesting feeling when you hear it from him. Keep writing
| fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 3/6/05 . chapter 1
mwah.i dont have much to say about the theme because it brings back too many painful memories...but the poem is very good.
| StrangeInfatuation 3/2/05 . chapter 1
I love it. Just love it. i had a similar experience, cept i got suspended instead of arrested. ah well, great piece. rock on.
| JellySlippers 3/1/05 . chapter 1
This piece was great. Keep writing!
| Winter Reflections 2/28/05 . chapter 1
wow. hell i know how that feels. great poem