wow...i understand that

i especially like the last 2 lines D deep...

Wonderful. Very touching and sad.

Well written! You capture the emotions of the poem well even if they are depressing.

great poem very powerful you should be proud of yourself!Again your poem is on my favorite list.

I know how you feel.

Good job.

yet another powerful writing. im sorry that your family shunned you that is the worst thing in this world to happen. maybe one day they can c the love and take u back.

Wow! That's a very powerful poem. Sometimes I can't trust my family but after reading your poem, my family seems fantastic.

Wow this is very powerful. I really like it. And I don't mind spelling errors or anything :) We all have them, can't avoid them. So yes, nice work. I think you said it with as few words as possible, but as many words as needed. Once again, great job.

That was really good.

Wow this is definitely full of emotion and in my opinion the best poems and stories are written with emotion, about experiences and feelings. I love the way you wrote this although the stroy is really sad. I'm sorry they treated you this way but in a different situation my dad disowned me, and it's an interesting feeling when you hear it from him. Keep writing

mwah.i dont have much to say about the theme because it brings back too many painful memories...but the poem is very good.

alwaysFTT

I love it. Just love it. i had a similar experience, cept i got suspended instead of arrested. ah well, great piece. rock on.

xoxo

SI

This piece was great. Keep writing!

-Star

wow. hell i know how that feels. great poem