 Avocet 2006-03-30 . chapter 1wow...i understand that |
 Kaaii 2006-02-07 . chapter 1i especially like the last 2 lines =D deep... |
 Fang3h 2006-01-28 . chapter 1Wonderful. Very touching and sad. |
 Elphie Thropp 2005-10-01 . chapter 1Well written! You capture the emotions of the poem well even if they are depressing. |
 Fox Angel 2005-09-30 . chapter 1great poem very powerful you should be proud of yourself!Again your poem is on my favorite list. |
 Saint Sade 2005-05-01 . chapter 1I know how you feel.
Good job. |
 Nyte Tym Starr 2005-04-09 . chapter 1yet another powerful writing. im sorry that your family shunned you that is the worst thing in this world to happen. maybe one day they can c the love and take u back. |
 Topaz Sagittarius 2005-03-15 . chapter 1Wow! That's a very powerful poem. Sometimes I can't trust my family but after reading your poem, my family seems fantastic. |
 alligater20 2005-03-13 . chapter 1Wow this is very powerful. I really like it. And I don't mind spelling errors or anything :) We all have them, can't avoid them. So yes, nice work. I think you said it with as few words as possible, but as many words as needed. Once again, great job. |
 Worthy Of Love2222222 2005-03-10 . chapter 1That was really good. |
 YoLo NoR 2005-03-06 . chapter 1Wow this is definitely full of emotion and in my opinion the best poems and stories are written with emotion, about experiences and feelings. I love the way you wrote this although the stroy is really sad. I'm sorry they treated you this way but in a different situation my dad disowned me, and it's an interesting feeling when you hear it from him. Keep writing |
 fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 2005-03-06 . chapter 1mwah.i dont have much to say about the theme because it brings back too many painful memories...but the poem is very good.
alwaysFTT |
 StrangeInfatuation 2005-03-02 . chapter 1I love it. Just love it. i had a similar experience, cept i got suspended instead of arrested. ah well, great piece. rock on.
xoxo
SI |
 JellySlippers 2005-03-01 . chapter 1This piece was great. Keep writing!
-Star |
 Winter Reflections 2005-02-28 . chapter 1wow. hell i know how that feels. great poem |