I hate you. But that sounds really dumb when I think about it, considering this is based on real people. Oh well. I still hate it. I was convinced Donovan was going to kill himself most of the time and that there was going to be some horrible depressing ending, but was not expecting this! Also, the way Niall and Luke would be talking after an encounter with Brad or someone like they were all-knowing was great. Love it despite the sadness.

AH! everything is so ** screwed up! this is acually killing me! i absolutley love this story, but GOD is it hard to read! i want everything to be all la de da and happy and it's not! grr. hopefully it'll be happyish by the end. sorry for the rant...this really is extreamly well written and it sucks you right in. But it's so weird to think of this being based on real life. geeze these guys are just kids. hmm..guess i lead a very sheltered life. watevr, point is this story is great and I hope it ends well for all of the boys!

Thank you for your e-mail answering my question. I really, really liked this story and I'm going to read the next one too. Expecially because the ending to this really surprised me. It's not at all what I wished would happen but it will make the next part really interesting to read.

Oh god...that ending was close to heart-breakingly sad. I truly hate Niall's parents! I've got to read the next part...moving on!

I love it! Ugh it's so sad but it was still really good, I hope we at least see a little bit of his friends in the next story. :)

*sigh* Depressing. Though, at the same time, very fulfilling. It was an excellent ending for a second book. Leaves you hanging just enough to make you want to read the third. I must say I am deeply interested in reading 'To Look Without Seeing'. You have impressed me. SCORE: 10/10

The Critic, Devil Dragon of Pain

wow...

I can understand Luke's reaction perfectly and I think that he was just right in this chapter, as was Niall.

It's a shame that Eldermoor is over.

Bring out the tissues. Well done for finishing another part and I can't wait for the next installment.

*cries*

Yes, I really hope that they are together in the next part! But sadly I don't think it's very likely, cosidering this is based on actual events... -_- But I will still hope for a fairytale ending! :D

Great chapter!It was really sad... and they didn't saw each other before he left... T_T They have to see each other again! :'(It was so sad!I'm really expecting to see the next part of this stories pretty soon! I love them!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

I don't know what to say. That was so sad. They'll be together in the next part right? i don't know if i could bear to read it if they weren't together. Anyways, loved it.

OMG! It's over...for now anyways. Makes me want to cry... Such a good story. I hope to see the next part starting soon. I like the new characters you have in the char. info. on your website. Sounds like they are going to be fun. :D

Oh. My. God. This story, overall, better have a happy ending! I know it's based on real events and all, but damn... It just, better be all good for everyone involved because I don't think I can cry anymore.

Niall's parental units are arses. Poor Luke, getting the short end of the stick.. shoved through his heart. Is it wrong to feel pity for fictional characters? If it is, I don't ever want to be right. Damn good chapter, kudos to you.

OH NO! aww poor Luke...So sad i was crying over it...write more soon.

-shadow