I really liked this :)

One question: What does go on in that creative head of yours? You pull ideas out of nowhere! Everything you ever write is terribly unique. It's a compliment =P.

I'd say this is thoroughly engaging, though not as engaging and captivating as some of your other works. Oh, and I'd like to pass off your little grammatical errors as typos, but don't know if they actually were typos.

And I knew the stranger was gonna guess his name and he won't be able to guess the stranger's! *pats self* You said Doran knew, but did he really? I don't know... they way I visualised the whole confersation in my head, it didn't seem like he could quite grasp what the strager was talking about in the end. But maybe, that's what I didn't grasp. Oops!

I don't think I'd ever be able to completely understand what you're trying to say in your writings. Oh well.

I'm sure your prof. enjoyed it though. You creative writers!

-Sarah

Amusing! I loved it, it captured my full attention.