OMG i love your story.. I am a big fan of stories that are based in the past. And i also love romance stories, you had on the edge of my seat to see what was next.. I can't wait till you update.. please do it as soon as possible.. I love your story.

hi...i've just read this story and I was wondering if u r goin 2 continue writing it...anywayz, it's really good so far and i hope u update soon

I love this story - it's intriguing, enchanting, moving... You have a knack for real and effective dialogue, voicing the characters' fears and desires with wonderful clarity. Please update soon! :-)

Todd's a nice guy. :-) I like the way you've made the conversation so normal.

Once again a lovely chapter. You've portrayed Robert very well - the reader is beginning to learn more about how he thinks and does things. :-)

I love the intrigue and humour. It's brilliant, and very real. There's a little too much eyebrow arching though in this chapter, perhaps.

Another wonderful chapter. I was a little confused by "For whom but he had demonstrated understanding that did not elicit but the mildest suspicion?".

I have the sneaking suspicion that Robert was the betrothed to begin with, which is nice... :-)

:-o! That was... unexpected (which is good! :-)).

The dialogue is excellent, easy-going, not forced, and always relevant to the building of the characters. There was one instance of a "no subject" sentence that I noticed though: "Admitting to herself that it hadn't been too many years distant that the same argument would likely have brought her to the brink of temper..."

An excellent start to what I trust will be an excellent story. Only one thing really jumped out at me to change: "Giving a much-needed reprieve from the mindless banter that had run rampant." doesn't have a subject and thus isn't a proper sentence. :-)

good story

are you going to update soon? i really like this story and I'd like to see more of it. thanks!

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Lovely chapter, as usual. One bone to pick, though: irregardless is NOT a word. How on earth can Rachel not see that Robert is the one her father picked to marry her? Oh, the irony. I am amazed at your ability to keep the quality of the writing and still have very quick updates. :)

You are wonderful! Rachel definitely has some issues to work out, and you display them brilliantly through her dialogue with robert. good job!

I really like the relationship between Rachel and Todd, and I love how you're developing Robert Trent. His faith adds richness to his character. Thanks for the quick update, too!