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| FM Radio 2007-06-09 ch 7,  | abusePlease update this soon!! |
| FM Radio 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI like it!! this rocks, i feel so bad about what that guy said to her. |
| the flaming river 2006-12-26 ch 7, | abuseThis is a cool story. I hope you update soon! |
| Katie McComb 2006-06-07 ch 7, anon. | abuseThat was excellent! I hope you post the next chapter soon. |
| erica 2006-04-05 ch 7, anon. | abusethis is the best first 7 chapters i have ever read...it is amazing what you wrote you really need to finish this story. if it ever gets published i will be ther first one to buy the book. |
| not even close 2006-02-14 ch 7, anon. | abuseI've read some of your fanfiction and was happy to read this story of yours. I am honestly impressed at the writing done here. I'd love to have more character development because I'm not sure I understand the real motivation of the main characters yet... phenomenal job! |
| jade_is_a_star 2006-01-24 ch 7, anon. | abusewhat happens next? |
| AubriannaKnight 2006-01-03 ch 7, | abusegod, i can't believe you ended the chapter there.. no cookies for you.. thanks for the update yhis was an amazing read... |
| Ahemait 2005-12-01 ch 6, | abusegah! shortness! i dont liek the shortness! but i do liek the chapter. great story |
| Ahemait 2005-12-01 ch 5, | abusesorry it took so long to review! i really liekd this chapter, but however i didnt like how you write (falshback) and (present day) it just bothers me. if its a flashback for him, make it italized or something, i would think. besides that, awesome |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2005-11-29 ch 6, | abuseAwesomeness! UPDATE SOON! |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2005-11-29 ch 4, | abuseThat's hot but you need to be more elaborate with the love scene... I still love it! I'm just a sucker for love scenes... KEEP IT UP! |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2005-11-29 ch 3, | abuseCliffy I love it! Hey could you do me a major big favor *puppy dog face*. Could you review my stories, Razor Blade Kisses and Devil Feathers? Anyway, keep up the fantastic work! |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2005-11-29 ch 2, | abuseI like Haden! KEEP IT UP! |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseNice 1st chap... got me interested! KEEP IT UP! |