Loved it. Simply fantastic! Any others like this to save some time.

Had a nice flow to it as well, just like your other poem I rated 'Time Will Cry.'

You truly have a imagination rivalry with me from this day forward.

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"Your palms, my Bermuda Triangle."That's a gorgeous line right there. Loved the descriptions, loved the adverbs, the repetitions. Excellent, excellent poem to feast upon.