UPDATE UPDATE!hahaplease?i was laughing so hard while i was reading this about how scared he was and how cayden punched dane in the face

oh~ they did the naughty!! that's freaking awesome. i can't wait to hear the rest of this!! i love the way you named them, was i busy or something? *laughs* just kidding.

and yes, you are very evil. if you get online before i call... i'm going to give my twin a backrub, *then* call you... she's been whining at me all week... i'll talk to you soon. love you muchly!

I can't wait to see what happens next! Please continue soon!

WOoHOO!! I like it a lot! can't wait for more! It's great! hahaa, you did a good job with the humor...update soon! Yey! BYE!

I just finnish ur story n i so love it. please update(no hurries)

i reely luved the story, please rite more and dont giveup on it like the other 18 1 chaptered stories and good luck with the job ya wanna get.

Interesting...I guess I don't understand why the narrator got married in the first place...if he did it because he didn't want to tell his girlfriend that he didn't like her that's kind of chicken ** not to mention incredibly stupid and he deserves everything he's getting. It's not like its her fault he's stuck in this situation.

A nice, sarcastic piece, just the way I like it! I've read plenty of slash fics before, but nothing involving a guy who's already married. Very fresh topic, in my eyes... The story's off to a great start. Hope to see more soon!