Whoa! That took my breath away, it was so sad. Poor girl!

aw...that's sad..good and sweet, but sad

That's so sad!!

One thing: I think the lines are a bit choppy because they're so short and all...Maybe if every line rhymed instead of every other, you know?

But that aside...DANG!! I have a friend who went through all this stuff. This is really, really touching.