I read your other story with the scary chinese woman with the spatula. This is the same Darren right? Can I assume that the boyfriend is Daniel?

Pretty good, there were a few parts which were mildly confusing... Nothing that was horribly hard to figure out, but something things where maybe if you changed the wording about a bit it would sort of flow better, if you know what I mean... And perhaps show a bit more about him as a person... I mean, we know he's gay, his parents don't approve, but maybe a little more about him and what he's had to go through on a more personal level...? I dunno, good writing though XD