I like this poem a lot, actually, although I was hesitant (uncertain) initially. The language and flow of the poem reminds me of S.P. Somtow's "Vampire Junction."

Very beautiful, and haunting. It sticks.

Wow, amazing poem.

I love this! It's so sexy and powerful... wow...Bang Bang

wow:)

i love you lots and lots and lots! i love you for writing this and I shall spend the rest of my years bowing down in worship of you and this poem and building alters and stuff in you honor.. that was brilliantly brilliant and the best thing I've read on ficitonpress definitely, probably better than all the proffesionals, totally rocked! woo7

Whoa. Bang! That was brilliant. My one teacher always said writing could never be brilliant, a diamond could be, but not writing. I beg to differ. I love this. We're both obsessed with prostitutes my friend.

i love it. it doesn't seem like it should flow, but it does, and very nicely at that. well done.

i love the concept. a beautifully constructed poem. i love your work - love it.