I can't belive your not already a pro writter..You said before that you were not as good as your freinds ..lololol..Your probably next level a intelect..I love it

AWsome!

This could be brilliant but unfortunatly the rhyming feels a bit forced in places which makes it seem a bit comical. Other than that though it's very good, and could be very dignified and impressive.

Stones decay, words lastNick