ok i LOVE this one the best so far

I love that poem.I think its very well written..Even though i hate that Jerk because of what he did but Yea(lol)

R'Y's you know what that means..lol

seeing that you commented on allmost all of VampireWinter peoms..Id give you a shot... was really on serching..That right guy is probably in your face and you wouldn'teven know mybe your ever it is...That was an swsome poem...THE BEST SO Far!AWSOME!

This flows well and is empathic... the rhming scheme words well as a mournful undertone, too.

Stones decay, words lastNick