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Reviews For: Tribe of the Hunters

butterfly^kiss
2005-03-12
ch 2,
abusekeep going. don't worry, ur 2nd chap is not bad. though i did think u could do better. is danny n luke the cute little things that u draw?
Madcow13
2005-02-27
ch 2,
abuseSorry because the chapter is longer? Are you mad? Long chapters are good! Your writing style is fine, don't worry! This chapter was very interesting. I'm already trying to figure out why Van was summoned to Nullingham. Anyway, update as soon as you can.
TearsOfSilver
2005-02-27
ch 2,
abuseYour writing skills are fine! Don't worry about it! I was intrigued the entire time! It sounds very fascinating and you really held my attention!! I will be checking out more of your work!!
Madcow13
2005-02-25
ch 1,
abuseNames would be helpful, I agree. Apart from that this is a great start. I love the idea for the plot and hope you write the rest of the story as well as this chapter. If so, this could turn into a great story which I look forward to.
S.S. Dailey
2005-02-24
ch 1,
abuseI saw you didn't have any reviews so I'll start. I like reviewing people who don't get reviews. I think this is a great start. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. One thing though: I like to know the characters names. So if it is possible to bring their names into the picture, it would be greatly appreciated.
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