It strikes me as being so true in today's world. "With your gross superego." I know the feeling. Bravado is a silly thing. I love your intelligence, analysis and observations of the world, and at the end, your humanity. Good job, again.

Touche. I like the first three lines of each stanza.. is that what they're called..? the best.I like this one very much. Write on!

A rather shocking change of heart in the last stanza, but good work in all. Work on phrasing a little, it gets a bit confusing at my stuff out if you've got the timeinzaniti