Wow, your last few lines in this completely tied it all together. Your ablitly to write with such insightful words and feelings is absolutely astonishing. Very well done once again.

This poem is really all over the place, no certain point to gain but for some reason i like it and I'm not sure why. It's like another world and yet thats exactly what all of us need sometimes so keep writing, maybe i'll find out why i like your writing so much.