M...pretty. I really like the line,"So prepare to be covered in crimson kisses."

The fact that someone in my house is playing Bob Marley does *not* help the mood of this poem...hah. Anyway. This is very...I'm not sure what the word for it is. The fourth stanza is wondeful. "Cover it in salt for more effect" Great.

quite grotesque. heavy metal indeed. reminds me of manson for some reason. but it's an interesting poem!