very well written. you have chosen exactly the right words for this poem.

very well written, keep up the good work!

Wow, so well written, i'm all envious now. Nah, if you can write that well you deserve the glory! Enjoyed reading it, thanks.

S.O.S x

BAD FREAKIN **!

I AGREE WITH YOUR OTHER REVIEWER THERE ARE LOTS BIG WORDS but i suppose if for people with brain in the head (not me) would be able to appreicte them all but i love the poem anyway i like the kind of ora of agression and angst you create

*cries* To many big words! though nicely written!

Oh my gosh, Nika. This is BEAUTIFUL. It's not very long, but it doesn't have to be. It's short and to the point, and you express yourself so perfectly.