|Reviews for Going Forth|
| simpleplan13 4/1/05 . chapter 1
| Fabian Cortez 2/26/05 . chapter 1
This was very moving and engrossing throughout. I think you did way better than "not too bad" here.
| Sylvia Ann Elliot 2/24/05 . chapter 1
I like it, even though it tells a sad story. I especially love the first two verses, where the child is still innocent. The imagery in this poem is excellent. I like the line with the butterfly wings and the candy. Kudos! *bows*