Hm. There's something very intimidading about Times New Romans font when it's bunched up like this. So I pasted it onto a word processing document. Heh. Like you even care about that.

Very quiet. And suspenseful. Once you get it in the right setting. Heh. There's something very earthy about it. Slightly random - you don't see respected elders going out to kill girls for no apparent reason a lot. Hehe. She probably smelled like one of his enemies or something. Good job.

I am so envious of you! You discriptions are way better then mine. I'll be waiting to read your other stories please and thank you =p

You're descriptions are fantastic! If you separated it into paragraphs it would be easier to read. Interesting begining, very mysterious. I shall await the next installment with great anticipation. :)

A little confusing, but I liked the excellent descriptions, they were very well done. I really felt like I was there with them. Hurry with another chapter, yeah?

Kudos and cookies to you!

It was good, I liked ur descriptions of stuff lol but please make another chapter.. it was a bit confusing