| Reviews for The Fight |
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S0ulSearching 2/24/05 . chapter 1...Awsome. Thanks for putting it up, I really relate. *PAMMY* |
SagaciousPnay 2/24/05 . chapter 1 Wonderfully written Trista. I'm sorry you felt these awful feelings and i KNOW u can cope...and move on :) I can't wait to read more of ur poems. They rock! Thanx a million for reading some of my poems. I'm grateful to hear such comments ::bows::SagaciousPnay |
roselilie 2/24/05 . chapter 1Nice, I like how I can hear and feel the argument. Keep it up |
Angel of the North 2/24/05 . chapter 1Good poem, but you could use being more concise given the topic, or else splitting it down into ideas/stanzas. Be careful about slips into cliche 'daggers are going through my heart'. Lots of merit in it. |