Very dark and scary. But it really makes sense with all the imagery in this.

wow. painful.

i like it.

keep writing!

Really strong. I like it. Makes me feel it.

i like this is good

I understood the poem more from reading the explanation thing than the poem itself. I think it might help if maybe you added something about how it was an accident

good idea none the less

wow! this is good... thanks for the review... I've been having trouble uploading stuff lately, but I'm trying to add more!

-^^- I have found another dark poet! And I'm glad, this was an excellent piece. I loved it!

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Great view on manical insanity!!

Hmm... I think this would have been better if you made it a bit longer... and a tad more descriptive... but the idea behind it is strong... Good job!

~Kupo~

That's so sad...

wow pretty good(by the way thats what im doing with my psongs they are bein made rocky)-keep writing-zak

Chilling, but wonderful all the while.

creepy, and dark. i like how you leave the end open as well; you explained the background in your summary and yet there are still unanswered questions. nice -the Lady Elaine

pick something other than death to write about ... say it with me- variety..at the same time-- very deep

Wow, that's kinda creepy. Don't know what to say about it. I like the title. Nice work.