You know what I like about your love poems? You know what you are talking about. If you read my love poems, I really have nothing to base them on. These give of a feeling of, "Yes, i do know this." That gives the poem a great feel. Good work!. P.S. You have really shown me some great exceptions to the "I" rule.

Ahh the shadow, I do so enjoy this one. I can relate to being the shadow most of the times, I usually am by choice. I will read thru your rest work soon, thanks for reading thru and reviewing my work. Keep it up and one love in life.

I can so relate to this w my brother. It's so good and well written! Showing how we feel.. Great writ

i know how this feels... this was a well written poem... god job

I have felt like this often before...I love this poem. Already a favorite.

I read this several times. Love it. It's one of those poems that you could read again and again. Deep.

I can relate to this. Never being the best, always second... I like the repetition.

Leeona Trance