It's really interesting, seeing the contrast. The Mods seem more human than the humans themselves.

:D CD

"Not that it mattered…a few moments after I grudgingly regained consciousness, there was a knock at my bedroom in?” I invited,"

I believe that should go, "my bedroom door, "Come in?” I invited,"

"A book fell off the top shelf and hit me on the head. Any minute now Toni’s going to find me, throw water on me face, and I’ll be awake again. Annoyed and wet, but awake. And I’ll never have to think about any of this again.”

Would you like me to proofread this some more? Or have you gotten reports of it already? Nothing like a ret-con to mess up the continuity. :P

"A voice called out to us in a piercing voice." Tone?

I figured I'd re-read it, it's a good story. -shrug-

"Then I put the book into the backpack I luckily hadn’t had a chance to put down in the store. It would have sucked to have to carry the huge thing by hand."

This one needs to be updated, because she doesn't get sucked in when at the bookstore.

-rubs hands in excitement- Rock on! A new Druidia chapter!

:D CD

Waiting anxiously for the next segment...
I love this story. The writing style is easy to read and very engaging. The characters are well developed and the story line is very good. I can't wait to read what happens next.
I envy Envy and her adventures. ;-)
Mom2

*cracks up at the last line* That. Made. My. Week...

Wonderful chapter.

:D CD

okay, so, I stumbled across this story, and since it has a lot of chapters, words, and reviews, I read it.


and.. I've been staring at my computer screen for the past 5 hours reading it.

and I must say, it's pretty much amazing. I really do hope you can get it published, I don't see why not.

You're an amazing writer and I love the storyline and everything. It's really really really good. Update soon please?

I was going to wait until I got to the end of these chapters, 82, before reviewing but.. I'm so sad that Arachne is dead. ]: I liked her a lot.

anyway, you will get a much better, longer review, when I get to chapter 82.

I have really been enjoying the storyline for Envy. I do hope that you will continue it. I admit I would like to find out what happens next. Mom2

wow in three days i caught up. im pretty proud of myself. YAY for 2morrow being a fri. so the next update will come in. im excited. i cannot wait to see what envy encounters on her walk. im very happy creepers is back now hopefully he can tell envy what the Protomorph is. (i am a loser and looked proto up in and online dictionary and it says its some kind of first so she might have to make ugh cant figure it out lol that might even be incredibly far off btw. heehee cant wait) UPDATE! =)

i bet someone did hear. poor dancer i hope she can heal from this she does have good ppl around her. now is definately the time for revenge. *evil laugh*

woohh. didnt expect that. revenge time coming soon. lol

I love Envy... I think I've mentioned this.