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| Andrea 2008-01-17 ch 82, anon. | abuseWaiting anxiously for the next segment... I love this story. The writing style is easy to read and very engaging. The characters are well developed and the story line is very good. I can't wait to read what happens next. I envy Envy and her adventures. ;-) Mom2 |
| Casey Drake 2007-09-24 ch 82,  | abuse*cracks up at the last line* That. Made. My. Week... Wonderful chapter. :D CD |
| NE0N.lights 2007-09-07 ch 82, | abuseokay, so, I stumbled across this story, and since it has a lot of chapters, words, and reviews, I read it. and.. I've been staring at my computer screen for the past 5 hours reading it. and I must say, it's pretty much amazing. I really do hope you can get it published, I don't see why not. You're an amazing writer and I love the storyline and everything. It's really really really good. Update soon please? |
| NE0N.lights 2007-09-07 ch 64, | abuseI was going to wait until I got to the end of these chapters, 82, before reviewing but.. I'm so sad that Arachne is dead. ]: I liked her a lot. anyway, you will get a much better, longer review, when I get to chapter 82. |
| Andrea 2007-08-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have really been enjoying the storyline for Envy. I do hope that you will continue it. I admit I would like to find out what happens next. Mom2 |
| Enaid 2007-05-10 ch 81, | abusewow in three days i caught up. im pretty proud of myself. YAY for 2morrow being a fri. so the next update will come in. im excited. i cannot wait to see what envy encounters on her walk. im very happy creepers is back now hopefully he can tell envy what the Protomorph is. (i am a loser and looked proto up in and online dictionary and it says its some kind of first so she might have to make ugh cant figure it out lol that might even be incredibly far off btw. heehee cant wait) UPDATE! =) |
| Enaid 2007-05-10 ch 62, | abusei bet someone did hear. poor dancer i hope she can heal from this she does have good ppl around her. now is definately the time for revenge. *evil laugh* |
| Enaid 2007-05-10 ch 61, | abusewoohh. didnt expect that. revenge time coming soon. lol |
| Hyper-chan 2007-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love Envy... I think I've mentioned this. |
| Enaid 2007-05-09 ch 54, | abusewhats a twinblood? well maybe i will find out in the next chapters. Im LOVING this story! |
| Enaid 2007-05-09 ch 23, | abuseenvy, sloth, gluttony, lust, and vanity are known. 2 more to go, and im guessing a lot more obsticals |
| Enaid 2007-05-09 ch 16, | abuseoh no she's in troouublee. heehee |
| Enaid 2007-05-09 ch 13, | abuseoh! cliff hanger... but i dont have to wait YAY. lol i really want to see pictures/drawings of these outfits they sound really cool. |
| Enaid 2007-05-09 ch 11, | abuseCat and Cantus are AWESOME. i like envy but she definately has some self esteem issues. i cant wait until her friend toni (which i bet is short for glutTONY) comes back into the book. she seems of the crazy adventerous type. tt4n |
| Keja Toshiro 2007-05-07 ch 81, | abusei finally caught up! yay |