definitely one of the more interesting reads of the day, you should continue.

I could kick myself right now. I decided to check out your profile to see if you had written anymore, because I feel like reading... And I don't want to read one of those half-** stories that you find on these sights.

And anyway, I checked the reviews to see if I had already read this, and it seemed I hadn't, becuase there was no review. But once I actually got a bit through the chapter, I remembered that I had! Damn me!

So... I'm proud to say that this is a bit disturbing, the content and all. But it's a very good story thus far. I would absolutely be thrilled to see it continued, if you get the time.

You completely underestimate yourself as a writer, you know that? You have so much more talent than I when it comes to catching a reader's interest and keeping it. Plus, it seems as though you have a firm plot (another thing I always lack ^-^;; Heh.)

Love you sweetie *hugs and kisses*

Julian

Wow, that was really interesting. I have to admit, that i really liked it. I guess i go for the whole vengance thing. Anwyas you should continue, i for one an very interested in finding out what happens. Keep it up!

i'm interested!!lol, (i don't know why i'm so happy, this was kinda a sad opening ^^;;) anyways! i hope you continue!! i can't wait to see what happens next, especially because i want to learn more about Cyis! ^^ he's kinda sexy aint he?lol anyways good job! and please continue!