|Reviews for The Demon|
| LordK 3/9/05 . chapter 1
This is interesting. I like what you're saying but the flow got a little awkward to me at some points. Still, what you're saying is really cool, and the writing is clever. Thanks for the review!
| Leif Erikson 2/26/05 . chapter 1
Nice wording, I could actually see a pretty clear picture in my head. I like it.
| YouHaveBeenWarned 2/26/05 . chapter 1
aweome analogy. there is so much emotion in there! keep it up!
| ChintzyHoyden 2/25/05 . chapter 1
very nice )
| jaganshi-kyou 2/24/05 . chapter 1
i really liked this poem and also why. i could practically feel the emotions.
| Darkhymns 2/24/05 . chapter 1
Nice. Provides vivid imagery here. This is a great poem.
| TheAngelofhope 2/24/05 . chapter 1
This was very good.
| VindictiveGoddessOfPinkRabbits 2/24/05 . chapter 1
That is a really good poem... a little creepy but cool. Keep writing!