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hail.the.bloocheese 2007-06-22 ch 2,	renee? i thought her name was bernadette.. try to stay uniform with your time markers. in the intro you said she was 14 summers, and here you mention bells. sorry to be so nit-picky, but it distracted me :/ but other than that, i'm enjoying the story. i hope you continue it!
hail.the.bloocheese 2007-06-22 ch 1,	great intro! i like your writing style. i was confused when the god mentioned dorado. i thought she wasn't able to have affection and such for anyone but darius.
M.R.Sanner 2006-11-07 ch 1,	wow this is really kewl ! I like it , hmm not many people use the word boon now-a-days .Lol I guess cause its to old fashion . Ek ! What if the next guy she sees is like 12 , or fat, or stupid ,or sleezy , or purely evil ! Ack how horrid ! Please return the favor R&R my story Frogs ,Warts & Kisses . Write on. COnfuzzld Me