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| Tytherpol 2007-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseIt isn't really genious, sorry, but it's nice. I would get bored writing it by the second contradiction and turn it into some themed morally crap, but yours is better. Sweet job. |
| Wistera 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI am somehow reminded of myself, and somehow completely reminded of one of my friends, only he would beat you in the acting department. You know, for being fourteen, if you actually just wrote that quickly, you have quite a large vocabulary. A reader, eh? Though it really seems like you did just write this, seeing as it kind of goes from one subject to another. If I could give you one piece of advice (You've probably heard it a million times): A "rough, cynical shell" is probably one of the crappiest things to ever put up, period. No matter how good teh shell is, it might eventually cave in. And that's when all crap starts. Well, I'll stop going on now. Have a wonderful day, and enjoy life. I loved reading this. ~'Nochi. Ps: If you have the urge to review other poems, skip my last like 6. They're all crap. Friendly warning from your neighborhood platypus. |
| Rio Madeira 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI agree completely. I lost all faith in humanity when Bush got re-elected. Nice job. |
| gangster-dolly 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseIt was just too weird when I though "This sounds exactly like me" and then I find out you're fourteen too. I do understand where you're coming from and you're obviously a very good accomplished writer. Nice rant, as one might say. --gangster-dolly |