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| Je-Nie-Dieu 2005-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseOkay. Here's a sequel to your poem. 'I before E, except after C'. Things you misspelled in this excretion of penultimate poetic failure: at least (yes, it's two words)Scooby (come on, now)MichelinDalainitYodaDopeyJohnny I think that's it. Apply for help, please. You cannot write in any sense of the word. Everything you say is like a cliche and a Down Syndrome baby twined together in a double helix of doom. If you think this is mean or unfair, then stop writing. Nobody can critique you if you do something you're good at.HusseinvainJack |
| grim-dreamer 2005-03-01 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this poem's a bit weird, a bit random, though faintly increases the amusement factor as it progresses through a strange list of strangers. Understandable message. Some mis-spellings (deliberate?), but the frantic tone, the desperation for a new identity came across well. (I don't like having no reviews on submitted work either. Sometimes I time the submission; most often composing a concise summary that could tempt the eyes to open. Who's this Ian Dury??) |