This is most definatly one of the better poems I've seen on fictionpress. I don't see any spelling mistakes... grammer.. it's just... beautiful. I love the way you write, with its discriptive words. God. I just LOVE it!

You really paint a picture of an Ice Queen, someone cool and indiffrient to the world.

Write hard,write long,write until dawn,The Love Demi Goddess

I'M SLACKING AND REVIEWING YOU instead of chionging my science, be honoured. m it's a slightly new style? i'm impressed you made it rhyme (i can't do rhyming!!) >< good job.

Great word choices and a very *thumbs up* expression ^_^