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| Nanashiko 2005-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseHi Keike! Great work! I feel that it's very realistic, not cliched at all. =P Jia You! Oh this is Val by the way. |
| melody mama 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, beautifully written. It took an unexpected turn, but probably more realistic than most of us want to admit. You're a great writer. Keep it up. And very creative write. |