Hmm, you have a thing with hope, eh? I've found hope often lets you down. Meh, I've been called pessimistic often enough.

On the poem, it's good, but seems to be slightly forced when it comes to the rhyming. Then again, I don't often see rhyming that I don't think soudns forced, which is why most of my poems aren't. 'Cept my faves all are...

All in all, good job.

Very nicely written. Well done!

Sweet! I like it! ANd the last line is so dramatizing!

This was very nice.