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| Sallie 2006-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI remember reading this story...! Do you still have my review of it? I liked how it is a short story but passes over a long period at a good pace, and the characters grow. =) And very artful writing =D I think that the rating should be moved up to T, and there are some typos to fix in the last section. "I can’t rightgully order you...""I thought you didn’t want to be a concubie"etc. Keep writing!! Sallie |
| ameilia lochart 2005-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseUPDATED!no more notes |