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| musephoenix 2007-11-14 ch 8,  | abuseWow, very impressive chapter! I read from chapter one till chapter 8 all in one go =]! A very nice last line too. |
| SpookyJezy 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abusethis is really good love it sweetheart =] |
| Carmel March 2007-08-01 ch 8, | abuseWow, this chapter was fantastic! I like the way you use subtle details to enhance the narration. It makes for a really nice, visual read. Update soon! ~carm~ |
| invizygirl 2007-07-31 ch 8, | abuse“Like a believe love, friendship, and the unknown can kill someone.” very interesting thought. i like it. excellent chapter. |
| Carmel March 2007-07-30 ch 7, | abuseThis is a great story so far! You've got wonderful characters, a creative plot, and an excellent style of writing :) Good job on this, and I can't wait for more! ~carm~ |
| invizygirl 2007-07-27 ch 7, | abusewow this is an incredible story. i really like the plot line. its intriguing. havent seen a story like it. excellent. |
| invizygirl 2007-07-27 ch 2, | abusei like this story a lot so far. its unlike anything i've ever read. excellent. |
| Victoria Winstanley 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abusehi if you want ... i could be your BETA reader for future chapters a BETA reader is someone who corects spelling and checks the story over if the writer is not confident messege me back at with your answer i would be glad to do it |
| MexicanGirl 2005-06-01 ch 3, | abusegood chapter its short but good also a but confusing but anway good work update soon |
| MexicanGirl 2005-05-25 ch 2, | abusewo! awesome!! update soon i wanna find out what happens. it would be so cool to mind read. creepy guy in the bushes i would have ran the hell out of there lol ok well bi |
| MexicanGirl 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abusegreat chapter. i like yasuo few spelling mistakes but thats ok no ones perfect |
| Imura 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThe plot is really getting good. And you have good character development. Keep it up. |