Ooh, that's really quite scary. Very nice...I was just watching that 1408 movie, so I'm a bit shaken up already, but I don't think that has much to do with it, this really puts some bone-chilling images in my head. Good job!

Love,
~Dia

Good relating one line to the next. Great job.

i deleted the stories you reviewed an hour ago before checking my e-mail... because i didn't know i had reviews on them and i thought they sucked...

so now im hitting myself over the head bc i love reviews! : )

stupid me...stupid, stupid me... lol

anyway-- I like this... the second to the last line: Sharper than a Toy.. i like that! :)

i like the theme of this.

i love: there is nothing to gain.

very to the point. i like it.

hm...i like very much

Kinda reminds me of those soldiers that go crazy in the middle of battle. :)

Hm. This has sucha twisted background. The four lines really did it for me though, I love the way you described the 'weapon'. Excellent.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Great poem!!

I love the title... Blood of the night... It attracted me to this poem... You were able to kee a constant emotion throughout the piece so.. great job! I liked this one..

~Kupo~

Wonderful! This is awesome. . . You should put it in front of a fantasy story...

beautiful message, flow, and imagery.. amazing poem!

hm... quite the gothic feel?

One of my favorites. I love the feel i get when it reaches the last line. Great job.

WOW! You have such talent at writing poetry... I wish I knew how to write poetry *sigh* I never unederstood why, but i'm only able to come up with a poem in my sleep, and then when I wake up, i forget the lines! I have such bad luck... Anyways,keep up the good... No, awesome, work!

Simply Brilliant. Great Flow Of Words. I Love It.