i didn't really like it. It felt contrived and forced, maybe even exiguous. Try again, maybe...

Short and simple. Yet effectively powerful. Very nicely done.

Shows some sadness of a fallen relasionship but it leaves to want me.

wow. i am starting to like short poems more to read just bc they are too the point like you said.this is really good. i don't know how you meant it but there is alot of ways you can and alot of ppl can relate.

~Liz

sad very sad and good

Soo sad, but an awesome write just the same.

Aww..so sad...but I like it.

Well written, two thumbs up ^^ - keep writing I like your style of writing. Also, thanks for the reviews you've given me so far.

Your writing is so good! Thanks for the review.

I really like how you stated what you felt, simply and powerfully, without going on and on. It sucks, being abandoned...

This seems like a problem in my life right now, but the way you wrote it was excellent. The last line really left a mark on me. This was fantastic.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Fantastic!

Short and sweet... Well... maybe not sweet.. ^^;; But I like hw this one is to the point, the emotion is there and prominent in the very first line and sticks with it till the end. Good job!

~Kupo~

I really like this one. Short but very effective.Well done

Amazing. I love it,