scary! All that power and lust! There were too many good lines in here to quote them all but one of my favorites:"take his body and mangle him inside me." I don't know if you're female but I imagine you are and if so - it makes the poem so magnificent. To hear that power drive coming from a woman makes me think of all the strong women in history.

holy **. amazing work.

holy ** faye-san! amazing, as always. the things you write inspire me. you have your own style incomparable to anything else. I LOVE YOUR WORK. honestly, faye-san. there is so much emotion in your works. i was unable to explain it before but i feel a little more able to now. there's so much emotion so much feeling that... it almost echoes inside your mind and your soul, it stays with you, hauntingly, and even if the words fade from memory the feelings remain. lovely. ~n-chan

i take it back, this one is my favorite. amazing great job.

~F>P

wow...that was...wow. a little twisted, but hey, we all do it, right? well, at least, i have. twisted, as i said, but cool!