...*blinks*...umm...creepy...

...you really should write a prologue for this...it feels a bit...empty.

Okay...that's just weird despite your amazing writing skill. But I must admit, it was still good. Damn you *shakes fist* stop being so good!

I love that you got this idea from a picture. Your descriptions are very well worded without getting too wordy. Great job, keep writing.

**Slave**