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| eyes of sky 2007-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseLovely use of imagery here and the alliteration in "crisp clear water" really gave that feeling of icy freshness. You managed to keep it from becoming a slave to the rhyme pattern, well done. |
| Rubina 2006-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abusem, is this written with someone in mind, it sure seems to be. I like the metaphors in the beginning. |
| hollie 2005-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is like a bitter sweet poem. It's sucks that the two friends are in a bad place at the moment, but they'll always have the day they met to remember. No matter what happens between them, they'll always have that day to look back on. |
| Lazy Kelly 2005-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw! How cute!! Calciana gave you an A++, right? ;D |
| ShOeLoVeR 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem!! I like your rhyming skills and the last two lines especially! |