You have a lovely style of levity with underlying seriousness. Wonderful!

oh my...wow...my brain just exploded. i love it, its so chaotic, but soo sad...the last stanza, just perfect. wow. good job!

wow.. beautiful

Wow. That was amazing.

Hm...I don't know what to say about this poem. It kind of hits a nerve inside me, like after reading it, I feel like I should try and make amends with all of my friends that I have lost touch with. But that's just me :)

I love this poem, it reminds me of all the close friends that I've lost (or come close to loosing) throughout the years. The metaphores and all of the imagery are wonderful as well.

It's really good. Really sad, and seems very metaphorical, and that adds a cool feel to it. The style in which you did your verses is really cool. It's sort of scary, but like I said, very metaphorical. A very unique way to get across what you wanted to say. Love the last line. Bravo.

i love your intence imagery. i have felt similar, and yet you've been able to describe it much better than i've been able to to. well done =)

Wow this is beautiful...sad...mysterious in a way, but beautiful. Probably one of the best poems I have read all night long. It reminded me of my own life and people in it in some aspects. I just really enjoyed reading this...refreshing I think, the maturity of it. Good write and read.