OMBG! This is amazing! the fear of nothing then attacked when the fear is gone...It is a bit long but you string it together nicely the end and begining lines are beautiful.

Horrific. Beautiful. And so...real.

I lovee this one, Chris. I know Aaron thinks it needs some more form or something, but I enjoyed it quite well the way it is. Somehow there was enough rhyme and rhythm in it to make it very gripping. *shrug* What do I know though? I can't even spell.

Wow...very interesting. The rhyme scheme was very good, but the flow was a little off. Over all, it was good. Keep writing

Bunny