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The Un-great-ful
2005-11-28
ch 1,
abuseI think you've done a good job with this piece, but as I say to most people who try to write dark, most of the time the poems come better when they're non-rhyming ones. I don't know why, maybe it's because our sub-conscious minds try to make it more difficult to access these informations or something, but I usually find I can squeeze more woe and death into a piece if I make it non-rhyming.

Maybe you could give it a try.

Alan.
Darkgiftedchild
2005-03-20
ch 1,
abuseI really like this piece...very self-powering. Something most people don't or cannot possess.
behind the velvet curtain
2005-02-28
ch 1,
abuseThanks tons and tons for your reviews... and I'm very, very flattered to be on your favorites!

Anyways, on the the reviewing.I understand what you're saying here I think... I like it. To me it comes across as a lot deeper than what people might see at first reading.. or maybe I'm looking to hard. I do that.

Either way, I like.
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