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| Teddy Ricker 2005-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat was sweet! It was very kind of you to do that! All of your works are fantastic! |
| Nikolomagne 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuseHehe, even now, I always smile when I read this poem. Thank you Kage-san. This is most definitely going on my favorites. ^_^ *hugs* I'm glad you feel that way, too. Aside from all that, let's get down to the poem. The rhyme scheme is good, and the repitition isn't annoying, but what I really liked was the imagery. ^_^ That is so awesome. Everything you compare love to is awesome, from flowers to colors to seasons to candy to the elements and just - wow. ^_^ It's truly awesome. ~Nico |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful. I loved all the nature comparisons. |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. Nice job. |