i lurv it babe! mwah!

wow, very nice, it speaks to all...

wow... that's really good. you do an excellent job of conveying the emotion that the situation requires

whoa. did you really lose their trust like that? that's the worst. i know that i have so much trust in my best friend... and i don't know how i could ever lose that... but it would probably have to be very sorry.

I really like this, it kinda desrcibes who I feel about someone who broke my trust recently. I really like the 6th verse. Good job. QueenVixta x