I think it's great when you team up with someone else to write, as always, great work.

" gazes intently as tears fill up my eyes" that was awsome ! it was so sad, A lot of people ca relate to it, thats what makes this such a good poem.

i liek it

i love the work you two produce togehter. its always my favorites. two awesome writers combinded... nice :D

Sadly beautiful . . . don't know what else to say other than a damn good job.

'Tis gorgeous...I love every line...only advice is to (who Im guessing) is lindsay, and that is to type full words out rather than just "u", because that tends to block the flow of the poem...but the words themselves? Perfect...I love it when you two team up...

Its beautiful and poigantly sad. I adore it.